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Keep away from me

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Wow, a funny drawing with a serious storyline ^^; That's a first for me, I think. Well anyways, thanks to :iconitachirapist: drawing me an amazing work of my Black Cat OC with Charden (found here: [link] ) I felt like starting my BC story. Lol poor Sven xD It was my first time drawing him and I didn't feel like drawing his hat or coat :/ I like how he turned out though :)

For those who don't know who my OC is, here info can be found here: [link]

I really don't feel like writing these stories in fanfic mode. Heck, I still have my FMAB OC's story to finish and I'm being so lazy with that because writing fics takes so long. So for Luvenia's stories, I'm gonna improvise :/ Hope you still like this :worry:

Storyline:

One random day, Train and his friends are looking for a new job as usual. They go through a bunch of different wanted posters before Eve points out one of particular interest,

"Why don't we take this one...?" Eve points out a poster that has the photo of a girl on it.

Sven and Train immediately object to it; both for similar reasons: they don't wanna have to fight or try to capture a girl.

"Eve, I know we've never had a woman bounty and you want to try something different for a change; but I'm sorry. I won't do it. I'm a gentleman and trying to capture a woman is just-"

"The bounty is five million dollars." Eve replies in her usual monotone voice.

Train and Sven immediately change their thoughts on the matter and agree to at least go check out this woman who has a bounty on her head.

The sweeper team tracks down the girl to an abandoned part of the city that has tons of empty warehouses inside a fence.

"Well, where do we find the girl?" Train asks but at hearing a scream; runs with his friends to the source.

They arrive and notice a girl beating on 3 other guys with a metal pipe. Train stops the girl and the other guys flee. After it's over, Eve points out that the girl is their bounty and her name is: Luvenia Alsvik.

Sven, being a gentleman after all, notices Luvenia is beaten up herself and tries to give her some first aid. Luvenia punches Sven and sends him flying to the ground. Train asks her what her problem is and Luvenia simply tells him to shut up and leave. Eve then tells her, in a bold tone, that they've come to arrest her. Luvenia then grabs a weapon and tells them that if they want to arrest her; they'll have to beat her down until she can no longer move.

Sven and Train are surprised to meet such a reckless and dark-minded girl. They try to tell Eve to forget the bounty but she goes into battle with Luvenia anyways. They fight it out for a while and both girls come out equally injured. While Sven helps Eve, Train asks Luvenia if she knows what she's wanted for. Luvenia again tells Train and the others to leave; and if she ever sees them again; she'll kill them.

Train gives up on trying to get answers out of her and demand to Sven that they go. Sven rises but before he leaves, he tries to give Luvenia his number,

"Look, I didn't want to take your bounty in the first place. If you ever need help out of a jam, call me."

Luvenia tosses the paper away and calls Sven a worthless perverted old man. Sven sighs and tells her he was just trying to be gentlemanly. As he gets in his car to leave; he hears Luvenia say "I hate men with my entire being." It is then that he drives off with Train and Eve; but not without thinking about what she said.

Sven secretly hopes they'll see her again so they can help her next time; instead of trying to capture her.


I don't really like this first storyline I wrote for Luvenia ^^; It's...so cliche and bad. Hope people like the picture at least :(

Base used is by :iconmisa-pixels: [link]
Sven and BC belong to Kentaro Yabuki
Luvenia belongs to me
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Jeimii-chan719's avatar
funny and good job on this one!!!!!!